In this research paper, I was trying to show how literacy technologies are constantly changing, ranging from quill pens to the most recent ones, computers. My main claim was that writers need not worry about whether writing technologies are beneficial or not, but they should accept the change and learn how to adapt to the most recent technological advances. I used several sources to support my claim and I provided points from scholarly authors. I had a few counter-arguments that were just showing how the latest technologies have caused people to become poorer writers. I think my paper had a decent flow and had plenty of sources to make it stronger.
Anna provided me with great feedback on my paper; she pointed out sentences that were missing key words and gave suggestions on how I should reword some phrases. She advised that I should introduce some quotes better so the reader will understand what I am trying to prove. I fixed some grammatical errors and added a few sentences to make my paper sound better. Here is the link to my edited paper:
http://www.scribd.com/doc/84969430/Research-Paper-Final-Draft
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