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In our website, Literacies in Schools we are persuading our readers that there are many positive and negative effects on literacies within schools; many literacies are portrayed in different schools, effecting all students individually. We interviewed seven students from three types of schools (Public, Private, and Boarding) also including our own experiences through public school. We argue against people who say that there is only one good way of presenting literacy. I think that our display of the paper is working well along with how much evidence we have put into it. However, our main point is somewhat scattered and is not as clear cut as we would like it to appear. If we had more time we more than likely would have worked more on making our points more clear and bringing in our research into the writing instead of just giving all our research as examples. We would like for our peer reviewers to really comment on things that are unclear or disorganized because we have hit a mental road block. We will appreciate all advice very much so give lots of it (:
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