I was trying to show what qualities makes someone a good writer through analyzing myself as a writer and what I do before I begin to write. I thought that the parts where I used myself as an example went well. I also think my metaphors went well in helping describe my points. Some parts I would like to change however is the amount of research information and cited material. I believe I need more if I want my paper to be as effective as possible. I tried supporting most of my points with examples and some where supported with researched facts or quotes from other authors.
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This paper is about how every writer needs to have their own process that they follow before they write anything. It talks about how first you brainstorm, then you write a draft and while you are writing once you brainstorm everything easily comes out onto the page. The paper uses metaphors to relate the readers to what the writer is saying. This paper is saying that what the writing is writing isn't as important as the method they use to write the paper.
ReplyDeleteIn this paper I thought that you did a very good job explaining what you were trying to say and used good examples to make your points more clear. You told the story well of how you saw yourself write. I was able to find all of the elements on the assignment sheet in your paper. The corrections that I made were just a few grammar things and sentences that I thought readers would better understand with some rewording. I thought you did a very good job on this paper and I enjoyed reading it. Good Work!
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