Final Paper #1

    The main point that I was trying to get across when I wrote this paper was that the five paragraph essay needs to be taught in a way different then it is now. I wanted to show readers that the way the essay is incorporated in today's classes is actually hurting students but learning to utilize it the right way can be beneficial. I tried support my claims with logic, examples, and evidence sited form other academic sources. My argument for my point of view seems to be the strong point of my paper since there was so much material on it. I do not think the argument for the essay was very strong especially since there was very little articles that I could find that completely supported it. If given more time I would try and build up the opposing arguments and maybe cite more information from my sources.