Peer Response for Paper 1

Alex,
Your paper was written very well you tied in a lot of stories from your past and had good sources within you paper it was full of really good content. Some of the paragraphs could possibly flow together a little bit more and your last sentence made me wanting more. I think you may need to add at least a sentence or two after your final sentence to tie it all together. All and all your paper was very well written and you did a very good job writing your paper and collecting information. Best of luck on your next paper.
Tracy :)

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